Conlang translation challenge

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Mî fian baxféd:
"Olēétaen, olēéahl lēai!"
"Ta rerdan lenarain oneot ahl!"
Skra jéd felē exaen
wî lēai exahl
wî ta rerdan siadlenain oxav.


Updated version, 22 Aug 2012:


Mî fian baxféd:
"Olēétaen, lēai olēétahl!"
"Lenarain oneot ahl ta rerdan!"
Skra jéd felē exaen
iné lēai exahl
wî ta rerdan siadlenain oxahl.